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Creative Writing Competition

Primary 4

A Thank - you Email to A Teacher

1 P.4A Tam Che Fung Marcus

To: misschauhello@abcnpgps.edu.hk
From: marcustamhello@abchk.com.hk
Subject: Thank-you, Miss Chau!
Dear Miss Chau,
How are you? In this email, I want to say something to you — Thank you. The
reason is that you have taught me a lot and I become smarter and nicer. I think
you’re the best of all at NPGPS.
You are a cheerful and confident teacher. You are my Music teacher and English
teacher in Primary 3 and 4. When you taught us, you always wore a smile to us so
we felt more comfortable and paid more attention. You also spoke very clearly and
confidently in front of us. All of us listened to you attentively. I am very lucky this
year because you are my English teacher. I learnt to develop good attitudes and be
more polite because I talk very loudly although I am naughty sometimes.
I learnt a lot from you. I will work hard and pay attention in the class. Hope you will
have a happy life all the time. Thank you, Miss Chau!
Best regards,
Marcus Tam

2 P.4B Pun Sze Wing

To: mrlaulau@npgps.edu.hk
From: p14270@npgps.hk
Subject: Thank you, Mr Lau!
Dear Mr Lau,
Do you remember me? Thank you for teaching me Chinese in Primary 4. I write this
email to you because I want to thank you for your teaching.
I remember that you are punctual. You always come into the classroom before the
bell rings. You are never late at all. You are nice, too! You seldom scold naughty
students. But instead, you teach them to be good. You always give us just a little
homework, too! You are also creative. You always think of some fun games to play
with us (4B). You have creative ideas, too. I feel glad to have such a wonderful
Chinese teacher in Primary 4. I’ve learned I should be punctual, creative and nice to
my classmates and friends.
To thank you, I will work hard and play less. I will be helpful and polite to my
classmates and teachers. At last, I will pay attention in the class all the time. Thank
you once again.
Best wishes,
Pun Sze Wing

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